Completed in September :)
Hm and I'm not entirely sure how to describe this one.
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.:: HEAVEN HIDES ::.
© Helen E. Trevillion - 2006
Heaven hides here
in strangers' eyes
and in the warmth pressed between
lovers' hands
In children's smiles
down marriage aisles
and all the greatest words that
no one really knows how to say
Heaven hides here
in the cold silence
of burning tears running
down her cheeks
that slip through fingers
grasping at nothing, oh nothing
and maybe nothing is what she needs
There's a smile
there's a smile
only waiting for her lips to shape it
Heaven hides
Heaven hides
only waiting for her heart to find it
Heaven hides here
in broken promises
his mourning darkness
joy forgotten, direction lost
here in night's last breath
Heaven lies flickering
between threads of sorrow
and there's a path
there's a path
only waiting for his weary feet to walk it
Heaven hides
Heaven hides
only waiting for his heart to find it
Heaven hides
Heaven hides
only waiting for our hands
Heaven hides
Heaven hides
only waiting for our hands
Heaven hides
Heaven hides
only waiting for our hands to take it
Heaven hides here
in strangers' eyes
and in the warmth pressed between
lovers' hands
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Preview image: Mine. Do not remove.
Comments
midnightxmasquerade Says:
Yay, another great song! I'd write more but I'm incredibly bad at giving comments so I'll just leave it at this before I start rambling.
Minstrel Ayreon Says:
This might shock you, but my cat liked it so much that she sang perfectly on pitch with you for a bit. It was absolutely eerie--she hit the same note you were on and held it like a professional. She seriously does copy voices, and that's the first time I've ever heard her copy a song! Take that as a compliment!

And of course I love it too.
Cyril Says:
Very good. Ms. Trevillion. I have to admit that that is the most touching song I have heard in a while. The second would actually have to be the song "Inside" which is another of yours. Put me into "deep thought" mode, which takes some doing.
I like the vocal harmonies, and your voice has gotten even better since "Inside" (as it should) and I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. It starts simply, but then through ostinatos of the strings and some interesting effects at the end (I thought that was you shrieking!) I would say this is pretty amazing.
When you complete a song, you do it right. Kudos to you, and may your songs become even greater as time goes by.
Tidalrift Says:
Simply amazing, beautiful song.. and I just have to add this to my favs
AngelsDontKill Says:
You're just incredible with what you do... you really are...
The sound quality is just so good. I am curious though... what kind of microphone do you use to record with, and what do you have it plugged into?
breakmywalls Says:
this is such a beautiful song!
fav
you have a lovely voice!
howling wolf Says:
This song was so amazing, I totally loved it!
Hinata chan Says:
Man... your voice is amazing. I wish I could sing as well as you. Such a beautiful song.
Donut Says:
jeez this song is beautiful as well!
fav'd
michelleblack Says:
yum, I love all the effects, and your voice is like an angel, my dear