I made this poem the day from when my last Bf broke up with me which was on his Birthday June 7th,2006...He was such a JackAss..I love calling him that
.. So yea, ever since that day I've been writing poetry and I'm pretty good at it too(not to be bragging or anything).. But here are some pointers for some begginer poets out there, the best poetry mostly comes from the heart or the Mood of what you feel about something that has been on your Mind.
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Best way to get over things is to not think of them..or not to think of what you hate or dislike...if you do that your only attracting more of what you hate.So think of a good,and better reltionship.And being happy.Don't ask the where when and why I am posting this random comment on this random submission.It's not that.Take what the dice gives.NEVER use the word can't..you should end this poem about getting over it..the more you write about NOT and CAN"T..and not ending it with I CAN AND WILL.More of the negative will be drawn to you.This is beautiful poem.But to make yourself feel better about this you need to write the good parts.Never ever dwell on negativity or you will only attract more.Focus on what good be and act as if it already is.Imagine youself feeling better and good about what you ahve and what youw ant.Act as if its already there.Ignore and don't even think of the things you don't want.listen I care abotu well beings and if you respond wiht a "0_o" only shows me you wouldn't care but atleast go over what I said.Of course I'm not saying you shouldn't write sad poetry.You can.Morely if its not fact and fiction...and end it nicly or don't pay attention muhc to it.Just write it to please others..to see its beauty.
Well I have no idea where all that came from..I jsut watched this movie..and OMG..I feel so different....I don't think I will ever be da same . 
Heart of Happyness.Heart of Joy. Heart of Love. Heart of What I'm grateful for.Heart of I'm am greatful I have another boyfriend.Thank you,Nice poem -Fave-
evildream 88 Says:
Verry well written.
Stray Writer Says:
It's beautifully done and it is always good to use a human muse when you feel some emotion towards them.
Phaena Says:
Excellent poem, it flows beautiful and is not in the least bit confusing.
BornToBeReborn Says:
The best poetry comes from the heart, but is guided by the science of poetry and tempered by experience. Never neglect the science. That's my best advice for beginner poets, and for this piece.
lamejuice Says:
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Harkimbo Says:
Really nice poem.
And you're really right about where the best poetry has his beginning.
I know it myself. althought I don't know if my poetry is good. Some people say it is. I still don't judge my own work. Or I'll say its bad.
But for now you really show some great poetry. I just hope for you the good times come back.
Jenny 4 Says:
So very much true! ^^
Neji Luver101 Says:
Wow this is really good! I love it! I hope you feel better.......