Sad Little Angel

by Perry Porcupine

in Completed Works

Sad Little Angel

Angel who lost all faith;
Trust like other angels,
When she sees the darkness.

Her wings fallen down,
While the darkness grabs her legs;
Sending her in hell.

Not just any hell,
A hell of darkness;
That makes the angel vanishes.

In hands of the devil,
When she almost went inside;
She drops a tear on the shadow.

Then said,
"I'll never forgive myself.... for what I did;
I'll never be like others....."
Darkness got her angel heart;

Then vanishes away,
Like it disappeared forever....
Never seen or heard from the angel again...

No one knows her name;
She belongs to the devil now,
Because hell got her heart..

Inside of her darkness heart,
There's still a bit light inside of her;
But her heart will always be sad forever.

Forever....Forever Forever...
> Ocean

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Dec 28th 2006
Tags:
angel gone human nature little sad spiritual
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Just a poem request that someone did while ago. So meh I thought I could submit here though. Since I'm bit bored. So heh enjoy. Also some of the words on this poem. Has my feelings inside on it....

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Comments

Phaena Says:

Very nice concept, although the repetition of 'angel' and 'hell' are quite distracting. Perhaps the innocent child or such for angel and pit of evil for darkness? Also the last two forevers should have a comma in between them.

Keep up the excellent work!

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Smiling Devil Says:

I love the idea AND (offcourse^^) the poem it's really nice, but also sad... only with the second of the three forever's you don't have dot's in between... is that part of the poem? (I know it's vague, but I'm not English after all so I can't explain it good... srry for that...)

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XBrokenXPromisesX Says:

AWESOME!! i thought this was really good!

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KSapphire8989 Says:

It's very touching. * mews softly, giving him a flower* I give a flower to you in your poetic work. The cover page is very elegant as well. Such beauty yet such a sad concept.

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evildream 88 Says:

I like the idea of this poem. And I the fact that you can relate to this, and make anything or anyone that you may know to the angel, or the devil. The angel could be a newborn child, yourself or a friend. And the devil could be a enemy, life or a abuse. Well done

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