sora re-done

i have done an other sora painting, because the other one was really rubish, i think. what do u think better or not? please tell me
thanx
ps i didn't do the lineart
link to lineart: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/40887618/?qo=6&q=by%3Ajakuu&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps