.:: MY WINTER ::.
© Helen E. Trevillion - 2006
winter wakes from a dream cast in opaline
where summer lies like a ghost in our memories
and our world, darker now, wears a humble grace
my winter, so quietly alive
silhouettes of the trees dress the sky in lace
across a watery sun melting through the haze
and as I walk I feel the buzz of electric cold
on my skin, I drink it in, I drink it in
and now I am walking alone, down the same worn street
that strangers walk down, alone, without a word to me
the brief exchange of a smile as we pass each other by
a sweet exchange of sweet belonging
and in the faces of those who we know so well
gentle warmth brought to life in the numb pearl-grey
and we don't need to speak, only listen to the world
poetic world - there is nothing more than this
and in these moments we breathe this simplicity
discover fragments of love half-remembered, when
all we knew was the sound of her heart beating
and it said, "you are loved, you are safe, you are safe."
so here I am, and here we are, here to do our part
to figure out who we are and what we have to give
and with our words sew the sound of her heart beating
and let it sing, "you are loved, you are safe, you are loved."
x~x
you may find this song boring cos it's so repetitive
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but that's the whole point of it, just so you know. the lyrics are the most important part. the essence of what this magical season means to me. ^__^
Comments
Aayatomi Says:
I am STILL trying to figure out how to use DMP. I can't get a hold of any other musical programs. D: Not that'll SAVE anyway. *had made some damn awesome songs on a few programs* But all I can ever find are trial versions.. *sighs*
This is a beautiful piece. IT was easy to listen too, and I enjoyed it. It really reminded me of the winter times when it actually DID snow out here.
LadyEdana Says:
Lovely Song. Great Composition. Beautiful sound and flow.
michelleblack Says:
AMAZING. I LOVE YOUR VOICE. This is so beautiful, cold chills are everywhere.
FlamingScorpion Says:
i luuuvvv the flow of this song and yer voice is a great combination with the piano and soft beats.
Kyoumi Says:
Hm... I think it would have sounded better with it becoming a bit more upbeat at the third verse, but that's just me. I like upbeat songs. :3 But this way it's good too.
thejahn Says:
Great work. I love it. :)
Machete Says:
wow..fantastic job!
mercury yume Says:
the lyrics and repetition really work, it's a lovely piece.
Gilliam Himself Says:
You're voice is beautiful. It really compliments the whole peice. It's truly wonderful.
LadyEdana Says:
You know... I think I may do a picture inspired by this one